the bar chart compares different ratings
The bar chart depicts different ratings of mine and the whole class on six different car features.
It is evident that similar rates can be seen on the chart that most students found an air conditioning to be the most important feature, however, a sun roof was considered as the least important one for the class.
We had the same opinions on three features, that were, an air conditioning, a stereo and colour. We all agreed an air conditioning was the most significant feature. A stereo system comes in third position. We rated a colour and an alarm as the least ones, also, an alarm was the least pivotal feature for me.
Different rating could be seen for the remaining two features. Besides an air conditioning, I felt an airbag was the most vital feature as well, while the class rated this as the second most vital one. The class rated a sun roof as least important, but for me this was the second most important feature cars should have.
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No. of Different Words: 85 100
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 170 200
No. of Characters: 754 1000
No. of Different Words: 85 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.611 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.435 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.415 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 43 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 32 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.183 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.451 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.683 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.16 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4