A builder worked in your house a few weeks ago. You did not like the result of his work. Write a letter to him and say
- Describe the work you wanted him to do.
- What is your complaint about his job?
- What do you expect him to do about it?
Dear Sir,
I am writing you now to complain about the service that is being offered from your company’s builder. As per my quotation to your reputed company, I had requested to completely renovate my kitchen by replacing the old drawers, window, gas stoves, kitchen water tap and painting on the walls.
Unfortunately, the drawer your company replaced was of egregious quality and one of the drawers is already came out and fell on the floor yesterday. Moreover, gas stove installed is of some local brand, however, while charging the bill you had charged the amount of the superior brand. Appa...
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to send some worker to fix the issues
to send some workers to fix the issues
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.737 4.0
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