The chart below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about to the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about to the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph describes the quantity of visits to and from the UK in the period between 1979 and 1999 whereas the bar chart illustrates the most prevalent countries UK citizens visited in 1999.

A glance from the line graph shows the volume of visits abroad by UK resident outstripped that of visits to UK by overseas residents although both witnessed upward trend.

For instance, after a slight rise from 12 million to 20 million for the first seven years, the figure of visits from UK underwent a soar to a peak of 54 million in the final year. Like visits abroad by UK residents, visits to UK...

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