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The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries. (Sample answer 1)
The bar chart highlights a breakdown of information in terms of how many percentage of problems which people face once they move to another country. It is measured in percentage and the subjects are divided in three categories. Overall, what stands out from the figure reveals that there are different obstacles faced by people from different age groups.
18-34 age group experiences making friend as the greatest problem, with figure representing approximately 50%. Group aged 35-54, however, has this as the second biggest problem which is about 10% lower than that of people aged 18-34. The leas...
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