The chart shows the demographic trend in Scotland fron 1940 until 2020Summarise the information by selecting the reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant

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The chart shows the demographic trend in Scotland fron 1940 until 2020
Summarise the information by selecting the reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant

The given line chart illustrates the information on the trend relating to the popultion structure of Scotland between 1940 and 2020.

A glance at the graph reveals that while birth rate and population rate will experienced the downward trends in 2020, death rate tends to increase in the same year.

Starting at the point of 2.5% in 1940, birth rate varied around 2.0% in the next 15 years, followed by a shrink to reach 1.0% in 1965. After that, birth rate continued to witness a fluctuation between 0.5% and 1.5% over the next 4 decades and it is predicted to decrease gradually in 2020. Simil...

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while birth rate and population rate will experienced the downward trends
while birth rate and population rate experienced the downward trends

Sentence: The given line chart illustrates the information on the trend relating to the popultion structure of Scotland between 1940 and 2020.
Error: popultion Suggestion: population

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