The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart gives information about male and female teachers in six types of educational institution in the UK in 2010. It shows what percentage of teachers were male and what percentage were female.
Women predominated in schools for children. This was particularly true of schools for young children. Over 95 per cent of nursery school teachers, for example, were female. The situation was similarly one-sided in primary schools, where over 90 per cent of teachers were women. Men and women were more equally represented in teaching institutions catering for older children and young adults : secondary schools and colleges. Colleges lecturers were 50 per cent female and 50 per cent male.
Males held a larger share of teaching posts in higher-level institutions. This was particularly true for universities, Where twice as many males were teaching staff than females.
Overall, Women were more likely to hold the more typically maternal role of teaching young children. Males, on the other side, dominated in the higher status teaching role of university lecturer.

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2016-04-29 Mochammad Ramzi 80 view

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Discourse Markers used:
['second', 'similarly', 'for example']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.303664921466 0.268076937826 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.130890052356 0.116061578633 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109947643979 0.0759168565197 145% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0523560209424 0.0366838410393 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00523560209424 0.0131127313244 40% => OK
Prepositions: 0.157068062827 0.155750635184 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0418848167539 0.0379272487307 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76445999214 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00523560209424 0.0210936926555 25% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0471204188482 0.0948980150116 50% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0157068062827 0.00967000014798 162% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1073.0 1161.00487805 92% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.9 87% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23837209302 5.90752243213 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348837209302 0.337110787985 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28488372093 0.247514529752 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.238372093023 0.171178102325 139% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145348837209 0.112407865282 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76445999214 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575581395349 0.546246751206 105% => OK
Word variations: 50.4987418028 49.3433353143 102% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 8.93414634146 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.3333333333 23.0094962315 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1339800479 42.9750493124 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4166666667 135.714022679 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 23.0094962315 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.689975730869 36% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 42.8217054264 47.7609492067 90% => OK
Elegance: 2.66666666667 2.94281807926 91% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412232223967 0.418131533498 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.135284834946 0.181151798455 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.103412672734 0.0850326197045 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.581856420475 0.706616315825 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.117135007158 0.157042692854 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166267685391 0.228904883108 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161655895791 0.108899403657 148% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.213614293379 0.367819155151 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0432160584598 0.0812612215331 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282207422983 0.316326947829 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.189605653017 0.0921553760075 206% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.08536585366 220% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.02926829268 198% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9