The Bar Chart below illustrates the amount of Japanese tourists who travelled overseas during the period 1985 to 1995, additionally the line graph depicts how considerably Australia participated in Japanese tourist market during the same years.
According to give chart in 1985, the quantity of tourists travelled abroad was not high and was equal to 5 million people. From the time on,the number of tourist travelling oversees was considerably increased and reached to 11 million. In 1991, the mentioned tourists travelling abroad went a little down to approximately 10 million. After that, this amount rose drastically to 11 million in 1992 and remained stable for the next year. In 1995, it reached a peak until 15 million people travelled abroad.
On the other side line graph shows that only 2 percent of people going to Australia during 1985. It increased by 3 percent and reached 5 percent in 1989. In 1990, it was decreased by one percent. Again it was climbed to over 6 percent during 1994 .Then it was at 6 percent in 1995.
It is clear that, Japanese tourists travelled abroad and people coming to Australia was increased during the period 1985 to 1995.
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Japanese tourists travelled abroad and people coming to Australia was increased during the period 1985 to 1995.
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