The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.
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In this analysis we will examine a bar chart and a pie chart, both are information collected by a survey from different people. The first is about why adults pursue education and the second suggests the possible sources of financing.
Noticing the information collected in the first figure we can tell that most adults aim for education because they are interested in the subject by 40%. Less than that by 2% they go for it for the hope of gaining qualifications. While 22% think it is helpful for their current job, furthermore 20% believe that there will be prospects of a promotion. At the same ...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 225 200
No. of Characters: 1043 1000
No. of Different Words: 134 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.873 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.636 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.56 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 75 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.38 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.367 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.64 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.063 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4