The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table charts give us information about UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work after graduation. Both of the charts ere depend on 2008 data. There are four clarifications, such as part-time work, voluntary work, further study and unemployment.
The first chart showed the data of UK graduate students. The highest number was further study students by 29.665, than followed by part-time work on 17.735. The data slightly followed by unemployment on 16.235 and the last voluntary work by 3.500.
On the other hand, the second chart showed the data of UK postgraduate students. The arrangement of classification was the same as the data of UK graduates students in the first chart, but there were diversification in number. The number of UK postgraduate students was 2.725, than followed by part-time work on 2.535, than unemployment by 1.625 and voluntary work by 345.
In general, we can see that the arrangement of classification between graduate and postgraduate students was the same. The biggest group was the further study, the second was part-time work, the third was unemployment, and the las was the voluntary work.
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Both of the charts ere depend on 2008 data.
Both of the charts depend on data in 2008 .
The data slightly followed by unemployment
The data is slightly followed by unemployment
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Don't make it like a report. More comparisons wanted.
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