A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.Write a letter to your friend.In your lettergive contact details for when you are awaygive instructions about how to care for your petdescribe other household duties

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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend.In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties

Dear chethana,

How are you my dear friend?Hope you are fine. First of all I need to thank you for agreeing to look after my doggie and my house from a short notice. As I am on holiday since next monday, I was so worried whom I will keep to look after my home. After you agree I felt a great relief.

As you already know I am going to Nuwara-Eliya for one week and still I haven't decided the place where I will stay.Most probably I will stay my uncle's place which is so close to the town.But anyhow you can contact me through my mobile any time.I will send my uncle's home number too.By an...

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Other only thing you have to do is give our curtains and bed sheets to laundry service
Another only thing you have to do is giving our curtains and bed sheets to laundry service

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