The chart gives information about how global population and wealth is distributed by different regions and it is possible to notice from the beginning the evident difference among North America, Europe and Rich Asia-Pacific against China, other Asians from Pacific, India, Africa, Latin American and Caribbean.
In fact, the first three regions mentioned have a significant global wealth with percentages between almost 33 to approximately 23, due to the fact that the amount of population it is always very low: only Europe reaches the amount of 15%.
On the other side, the regions left suffer of lack of wellness since the population reaches picks of about 23% in the case of China or about 17% in India and in other Asia Pacific.
To conclude, the only relevant exception is represented by Africa and Latin America and Caribbean that, even having low levels of population, they have poor conditions of live which do not allow offering an adequate level of wealth.
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