Analysing the table about the percentage of national consumer expenditure on different items carried on in 2002, it is possible to notice that the category of food, drinks and tobacco is the most popular.
Turkey and Ireland spent respectively on these items 32.14% and 28.91% followed by Spain (18.80 percent), Italy (16.36 percent) and Sweden (15.77 percent).
For what concerns instead clothing and footwear, Italy got the primacy with 9%, while the other countries show similar data having spent from 6.43% to 6.63% in this sector, except for Sweden, the only one that presents a smaller expenditure reaching 5.40%.
Finally the items about leisure and education are the ones in which consumers of these countries have spent less.
The percentages infact are pretty low showing Turkey with 4.35%, Italy and Sweden with similar consumption of 3.22% for the first and 3.20% for the second and at the end Spain that is only arrived to spend 1.98%.
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Sentence: The percentages infact are pretty low showing Turkey with 4.35, Italy and Sweden with similar consumption of 3.22 for the first and 3.20 for the second and at the end Spain that is only arrived to spend 1.98.
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