The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph represents the data of comparison of number of people on the internet visiting two new music sites named music choice and pop music over a 15 days period of time. The general overview here is that the graph shows fluctuation in overall trend.

Turning to the detail, starting with music choice, 40000 people visited this site on first day. half of them dropped down the second day followed by increasing number of people visiting to this site is 60000 on third day. In contrary, pop parade net site were visited by 120000 people on the first day which was decreased slightly on the next day and gained same as previous on third day.

After third day, number of people visiting both the music sites were decreased and remained nearly 40000 visitors with pop music and 30000 with music choice. In the beginning of the next week, both the sites had a drastic incline until 11th day to 12th day, then decreased and finally pop parade music reached a peak with 170000 visitors visiting, and music choice had plunged to nearly 80000 visitors visiting to the site.

Overall, it is clear that, pop music were visited with maximum number of people, whereas, music choice has decreased to half of the visitors, compared to pop parade.

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on first day
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followed by increasing number of people visiting to this site is 60000 on third day
followed by the increasing number of people visiting to this site which is 60000 on the third day

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