The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant
The graph compares the percentage of income which spent by 3 types of people in USA and UK. From this data,we can see two big differences.
Firstly, a big difference is illustrated between USA and UK,and the amount of income is the greatest in USA by bad-off people. It is unbearable that the poor attempt to utilize the fuel less than the USA people. However, the proportion of fuel decreases steadily (20%), while at the same time, UK doubles significantly and fabulously(approximately 30%). It suggests, the cars are not much used by middle-income people in USA, but in UK, it is on the contrary, even, it trebles in a sharp way. It is shown that they try to drive cars a lot.
In the end,the proportion of UK remain stable for a moment by the affluent men, and finally, both of them decline gradually.
Overall, the percentage of income spent on fuel and oil generally gets higher in the UK,whereas , it drops in the US
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