The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The line graph compares the US dollars spent on books in four different countries over the period of 10 years.
It is clear that German people spent the most of their money on purchasing books over the period shown. By contrast, people in Austria spent the lowest amount of money on books each year, but its figure eventually surpassed those for Italy later. Overall, the figures for all countries saw an upward trend by 2005.
In 1995, people in Germany spent 80 million dollars on books, which is relatively much higher than the other three nations. By contrast, French, Italian and Austria s...
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