The graph below shows the way people of some country invested their money during the years 2001-2006.

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The graph below shows the way people of some country invested their money during the years 2001-2006.

The two bars graph compares how the people in some country invested their finances between 2001 to 2006. It can be seen that the trends steadily increased. According to the legend, the shaded colour represents the bonds share whilst the dark shaded represents the stock share.

According to the first graph, the bond share had a consistent increase from 2001 to 2006. it started off with 100 billion share, then followed by almost 10% increase in every succeeding year, all except in 2003 and 2004 when the increases were only just under 5%. However, the last couple of years continued to ...

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