The graph shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Stramouth School from 2006 to the present. Summarise the information by selecting, and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Sam.shree on Mon, 01/26/2015 - 14:19

The two map given shows how the development of tourist island takes place from bared island. The island is surrounded by the dark sea which is 100 meters above the sea level. This islet have many tall coconut trees with a natural beach on the west side of island, which makes it perfect for the tourism place.

Now the Island is beautifully converted into a full tourist place. Shipping services with wind boats is also available for tourists. Pier is also constructed on the south side of the island. Reception is built for welcoming the tourist on island and five shacks are made specially for their accommodation, the beach is now used as a swimming area. A restaurant is also constructed for them with proper footpaths and vehicle tracks. Nine housing facilities is also available for the east side of island. In short the island is now fully transformed into a full working tourist island.

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The two map given shows how the development
The two maps given show how the development

This islet have many tall coconut trees
This islet has many tall coconut trees

Shipping services with wind boats is also available
Shipping services with wind boats are also available

Nine housing facilities is also available
Nine housing facilities are also available

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 155 200
No. of Characters: 727 1000
No. of Different Words: 92 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.528 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.69 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.459 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 45 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 31 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.608 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.443 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.534 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.101 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 4