Inviting a friend

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Inviting a friend

Dear John,

How’s it going? I hope you’re doing well. I want to inform you that I’m planning a birthday party for my classmate Tom. It’ll be a great pleasure if you attend this party. Don’t worry; I’ll give you some information about this event such as date and other required things.

As you know, at our school there’re many students from overseas and Tom’s one of them. While he’s living in a dorm, from time to time I notice that Tom feels upset and homesick. Therefore, I consider this birthday party will make him feel relaxed.

His birthday is 27the May, so I think we...

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