The line chart presents the difference between the number of foreign visitors and native residents travelling abroad in the UK during a 20-year period from 1979 to 1999.
According to the chart, the gap between the exotic visitors and the native outgoing people of the UK were barely noticeable at first(1979). From then on, both of them saw an increased trend, however, the number of outgoing people grew little faster than that of the incomings before 1985. After that, more quickly increasing speed was found in the count of outgoing travellers, while that of the incoming ones was steady. By...
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