The given pic chart illustrate comparison of the various causes of agriculture land become less productive and affected three region of the word during the 1990.
From the pic chart ,overgrazing is more than one third of degradation of land which used to 28% of over_cultivation,one third of deforestation and 7 percent other degradation of land.
This causes effect different region in different in the 1990 with Europe have much as 9.8% of degradation due to deforestation. while North America and Oceania are minimal degradation due to deforestation which used 1.7%.Oceania have much as 11.3% degradation due to overgrazing Europe and North America 15_5.5% degradation from overgrazing.Europe are the highest percent of the total land degradation which have 23 percent and second highest percent goes to Oceania which have 13%.North America 5% .Generally Europe are 7.7% degraded due to over cultivation .North America and Oceania have 3.3%.
overall,It is clearly that Europe suffered more from farmland degradation than other regions .The main causes these were deforestation and over cultivation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.336842105263 0.268076937826 126% => OK
Verbs: 0.126315789474 0.116061578633 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1 0.0759168565197 132% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0315789473684 0.0366838410393 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00526315789474 0.0131127313244 40% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131578947368 0.155750635184 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0157894736842 0.0379272487307 42% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.29086658466 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0315789473684 0.0210936926555 150% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0526315789474 0.0948980150116 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0210526315789 0.00967000014798 218% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1112.0 1161.00487805 96% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.9 86% => OK
Chars per words: 6.5798816568 5.90752243213 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.378698224852 0.337110787985 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295857988166 0.247514529752 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189349112426 0.171178102325 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.165680473373 0.112407865282 147% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29086658466 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520710059172 0.546246751206 95% => OK
Word variations: 42.8407678023 49.3433353143 87% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 8.93414634146 56% => OK
Sentence length: 33.8 23.0094962315 147% => OK
Sentence length SD: 126.28222361 42.9750493124 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.4 135.714022679 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8 23.0094962315 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.689975730869 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 1.48048780488 1756% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 63.3857988166 47.7609492067 133% => OK
Elegance: 2.96774193548 2.94281807926 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257057235314 0.418131533498 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.210094851911 0.181151798455 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0752657240511 0.0850326197045 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.888417349337 0.706616315825 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192266053069 0.157042692854 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194613938805 0.228904883108 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145542254787 0.108899403657 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260873844363 0.367819155151 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0705804338921 0.0812612215331 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221598092476 0.316326947829 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150217016516 0.0921553760075 163% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70731707317 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.14146341463 438% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 3.16585365854 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 5.0 0.956097560976 523% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
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Rates: 61.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.5 Out of 9