The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.

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The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.

The pie chart shows the amount of revenue and expenditure over a year of a children’s charity in the USA. Overall, it can be seen that, the donated food accounted as the majority of income, while program services accounted for the most expenditure.

Total amount received as revenue made up of $53,561,580 while total amount consumed as expenses made up of $53,224,896. In detail, about 86.6% of total revenue accounted as donated food whereas the charity spent on program services of 95.8% of total expenditure.

A 10.4% of revenue sources made up of community contributions. The second income sources were from program revenue of 2.2% of total revenue and other income of 0.4% of total income. Investment income and government grants received with the same proportion of 0.2% out of $53,561,580.

In comparison, there are only 3 categories of expenditures for USA children’s charity namely; program services, fundraising, and management and general. The majority expenditure used on program services and the second highest consumed on fundraising of 2.6% of total expenditures. The least spending was on management and general of total $53,244,896 of 1.6%.

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