Task: 1
You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your leter
* explain why you changed jobs
* describe your new job
* tell him/her your other news
Dear Mathew Fernandis,
How are you? How is your works going?
I got job in Qatar RasGas Company as a Planning Engineer. I am so happy to share this news with you. Now, my job is fully engaged with the Field Maintenance - Planning Team. Here, working time starts from 7am to 3 pm comparing to our previous organization working time 1 hour less. It was really a fantastic and challenging to work and know what is going inside the Plant. RasGas is using ERP system as SAP. My part of work is creating from Functional Location to releasing the Work Order.
I need to say about new Colleagues Magesh from Andhra Pradesh and John from Mumbai. They are very kind and good helping tendency. I bought new mobile S4. I took accomodation near to my office. I invite you to come at any time and visit if you are free.
Keep in touch
With Best Regards
Thejo
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I got job in Qatar RasGas Company
I got a job in Qatar RasGas Company
It was really a fantastic and challenging to work and know
It was really fantastic and challenging to work and know
It was really a fantastic and challenging job to work and know
They are very kind and good helping tendency.
They are very kind and good in a helping tendency. ???
I bought new mobile S4.
I bought a new mobile S4.
Sentence: I took accomodation near to my office.
Error: accomodation Suggestion: accommodation
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Avg. Sentence Length: 9.235 21.0
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 17 10
No. of Words: 157 200
No. of Characters: 666 1000
No. of Different Words: 112 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.54 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.242 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.35 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 38 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 24 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 17 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 9.235 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.07 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.176 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.272 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.575 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.076 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4