The pie charts describes the expenses of a particular institution in the year 1981, 1991 and 2001. It can be clearly seen that teachers salary got the highest proportion averaging from 40-50% in a three year period of time.
Let us take a closer look at other workers salary. In 1991 particularly, it range below a quarter, which is 22%, and in 1981, it is almost more than a quarter, which is 28%. By the year 2001, it gradually dropped to 15%. Then this was followed by resources ranging from 9% in 2001, slightly rose up to 15% in 1981 and dramatically inclined to 20% for the year 1991.
However, furniture and equipment varies a lot for the fact that it covers from 5% in 1991, 15% in 1981 and 23% in 2001. Lastly, insurances remained the lowest with 2% for 1981, 3% for 1991 and 8% for the year 2001.
- Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only; Others, however, feel cell phones should be used mostly for work. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 70
- Essay topic:Most of big cities are overpopulated. Why do people still move to big cities? Give your opinion and example. 45
- It is believed that everyone should have an ambition to become successful in life Is it really important to have these ambitions Is being ambitious good or bad 63
- Nowadays most parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. What are the reasons for parents to do this? Does it have a positive or a negative effect on children in general? 93
- Water is a natural resource thatshould always be free.Governments should ban the saleof bottled water.To what extent doyou agree or disagree? 57
it range below a quarter
it ranges below a quarter
flaws:
No. of Words: 151 200
More content wanted. Read a real story by a testbig user why more content:
http://www.testbig.com/ielts-essays/some-people-prefer-spend-their-live…
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 151 200
No. of Characters: 621 1000
No. of Different Words: 91 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.505 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.113 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.459 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 36 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 26 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 18 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.214 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.447 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.626 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.143 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4