The given three pie charts is an illustration of a UK university's expenditure in three years (1981, 1991 and 2001).
From a careful observation of the pie chart, it is apparent that bulk of the school's finance was spent on the teaching and non-teaching staff.
Moreover, there was a prominent reduction in the amount of money spent on firniture and equipments in the year 1991, when compared with the school's expenses on the same items in 1981. However, nine years later, more money was spent on these items ranging from 7% to 24%.
Furthermore, there was a slight increase in the amount spent on resources in 1991 while there was a great reduction in the school's expenses on resources like books in 2001.
In conclusion, there was a substantial decrease in the amount paid to the non-teaching staff through out the three years, that is, 1981, 1991 and 2001 with 33%,23% and 18% of the university's expenditure respectively.
The given three pie charts is an illustration
The given three pie charts are an illustration
Sentence: Moreover, there was a prominent reduction in the amount of money spent on firniture and equipments in the year 1991, when compared with the school's expenses on the same items in 1981.
Error: firniture Suggestion: furniture
flaws:
The last paragraph is a wrong conclusion.
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