Tourism in the United Kingdom contributes billions of pounds sterling to the UK economy.The table below identiies the twelve most visited paid-admission attractions in the UK in 1999 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the table provided elucidates the twelve most prevalent non-gratis attractions located in the UK in 1999 and 2000. It is apparent that roughly all sightseeing spots experienced flimsy abatements in the numbers of adherents throughout a year.
One particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that the recently launched sights, namely Millennium Dome and London Eye with the rates of approximately 6.5 and 3.3 million people respectively being the first two the top most attended attractions saw no fluctuations due to the belated opening. ALton Towers with the quantit...
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