The two maps below show an island,before and after the construction of some facilities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make
comparisons where relevant.
The two maps below illustrates an island with and without some tourist facilities build on them after a period of time.
Overall, the island had started having facilities. There were manufacturing of some facilities essential for life to be lived there.
Before the construction of an island, it had a large area of an empty land with some palm trees at distance. The land had a small beach area at it's east. The whole of the island was surrounded by sea.
However, after the construction, the empty land area was covered with many accommodation places that were linked to each other and to the beach through footpath. A vehicle track had also been laid which was connecting pier, reception area and restaurant, making them easily available to the inhabitants of the island. The beach had also got the swimming area. Furthermore, ships are available as a transport mean and making the island an easily reachable place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ourist facilities build on them after a period of time. Overall, the island had started havin...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276836158192 0.268076937826 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.158192090395 0.116061578633 136% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0564971751412 0.0759168565197 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0338983050847 0.0366838410393 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0225988700565 0.0131127313244 172% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.118644067797 0.155750635184 76% => OK
Participles: 0.0677966101695 0.0379272487307 179% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73714195615 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0225988700565 0.0210936926555 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.152542372881 0.0948980150116 161% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0112994350282 0.00967000014798 117% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 936.0 1161.00487805 81% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.9 79% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0 5.90752243213 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.307692307692 0.337110787985 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.211538461538 0.247514529752 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160256410256 0.171178102325 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141025641026 0.112407865282 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73714195615 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608974358974 0.546246751206 111% => OK
Word variations: 53.9010715331 49.3433353143 109% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.6 23.0094962315 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6093886368 42.9750493124 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 135.714022679 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 23.0094962315 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 36.7538461538 47.7609492067 77% => OK
Elegance: 2.15789473684 2.94281807926 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.488363217827 0.418131533498 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138413537286 0.181151798455 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0810643823912 0.0850326197045 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.656801626648 0.706616315825 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157001699046 0.157042692854 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229836117561 0.228904883108 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904698703624 0.108899403657 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.251356936686 0.367819155151 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.115361569528 0.0812612215331 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31162538282 0.316326947829 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878891225483 0.0921553760075 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.5 Out of 9