Write a Letter to a friend you have visited before. Now you are going there again on business tripSay how you enjoyed your last tripDetails of your plan tripSuggestions for the arrangements for him/her

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Write a Letter to a friend you have visited before. Now you are going there again on business trip

Say how you enjoyed your last trip
Details of your plan trip
Suggestions for the arrangements for him/her

it's been long since last we both were in touch. Thank you for the wonderful times we shared together last year. it's my pleasure to inform you that am coming to back to your city again next month for another business workshop. I will like it, if we can continue visitation to tourism we did together last time. may be we will have chance to visit Sam okwaraji museum this time.

The workshop was schedule to run through two weeks from 7th of june to 21st of june. it's schedule to hold in week days. Therefore i will have four days in weekends to go with you to museums, parks and other tourist centers.

I will be in Abuja a day before the program. Since i know your house already, i suggest you leave your key to one your trusted tenants. so that i will not need to go to your work place.

Thanks for your understanding. Extends my greetings to Tolu, Kunle and their Mother.

Best wishes.

Gafar

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it's my pleasure to inform you that am coming to back to your city again
it's my pleasure to inform you that I am coming to your city again

may be we will have chance to visit Sam okwaraji museum this time.
maybe we will have a chance to visit Sam okwaraji museum this time.

The workshop was schedule to run
The workshop was scheduled to run

it's schedule to hold
it's scheduled to hold

your key to one your trusted tenants
your key to one of your trusted tenants

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 169 200
No. of Characters: 707 1000
No. of Different Words: 113 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.606 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.183 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.108 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 37 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 28 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 16 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 5 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.072 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.273 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.323 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.743 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.156 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4