Write a letter to the local agency looking for an apartment the family to move to another city. In your letter you should include
when and why moving
house location requirements
and the requirements of the house
Dear Sir/Madam,
I got your reference from a friend of mine who availed your services about an year back. I believe you cater to the East Kailash area and I am writing this letter to enquire about availability of an apartment in that locality.
I work in the State Lending bank and get transferred to a new branch every 3-4 years. This time I have been transferred to the Diamond District branch and I will be joining on the 20th of next month. I prefer to live close to my work location to save on travel time and I got to know that the East Kailash colony is close by and has all the ...
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Thanks :) You have mentioned,
Thanks :)
You have mentioned, "write the essay in 20 minutes". Why so?
There are only 20 minutes for
There are only 20 minutes for IELTS task I. The e-rater will give warnings to all essays with words over 200. If you can finish the essay in 20 minutes, simply ignore this message.
about an year back.
about a year back.
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No. of Words: 227 200
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 227 200
No. of Characters: 927 1000
No. of Different Words: 134 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.882 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.084 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.281 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.214 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.351 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.143 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.353 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.681 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.149 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4