Write a resignation letter to your manager.
How was the experience.
Explain why you are leaving.
Dear Manager,
This to notify you that I would like to pursue opportunities outside this organization, and I am aspiring to move up in the technical career ladder.
It has been immense pleasure working with this organization, and especially under your leadership. I have developed skills to overcome the obstacles in the project work, and I learnt how to give estimates to track and reach each milestone. I have been involved in various types of work, which made me acquire diversified skill set.
However, I had to make a choice between making progress in career ladder and acquiring plenty of skills by staying in the same position. I chose to move up in the ladder by accepting the higher designation in a promising start-up. I shall transfer my knowledge to fellow engineer before the completion of notice period service so that there will not be any unwanted interruptions in the progress of the project.
I hope you understand my career goals and give positive feedback if I give you as reference.
Regards
John
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Dear Sir, Thanks for
Dear Sir,
Thanks for evaluation.
Could you please point out where are those 12 grammatical errors in the essay ?
It is not 12, but 1 2; 1
It is not 12, but 1 2; 1 means one error you have, 2 means you can have two mistakes.
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It has been immense pleasure working with this organization,
It has been an immense pleasure working with this organization,
flaws:
Sentences varieties wanted. Look, a lot of sentences start with subject 'I':
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 173 200
No. of Characters: 826 1000
No. of Different Words: 111 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.627 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.775 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.802 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 65 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.3 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.067 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.377 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.771 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.112 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4