Writing Task1:-You recently went on a holiday with your friend and took some photographs along with him.
Explain the reason why you couldn't get all photographs
Ask him about one particular photograph which he took of you
Tell him why you liked that one specific photograph
Dear Victoria,
How are you? It was a fantastic tour to Copra with you. The reason I am writing is about the photographs that I think skipped to download from your digital camera. Remember, I plugged your digital camera to my laptop to download all photographs. When we checked it was 95% complete, but after a while laptop shut down itself due to lower battery power. AT that moment we thought download might be complete and just went out in hurry without checking.
However, yesterday when I was showing pictures to my friend over here, I found that I haven’t got any of the ten photos near...
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Avg. Sentence Length: 14.188 21.0
No. of Words: 227 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 10
No. of Words: 227 200
No. of Characters: 1002 1000
No. of Different Words: 146 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.882 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.414 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.376 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 63 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 48 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.188 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.058 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.188 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.316 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.551 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.225 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4