You are leaving the country to return to your home country, and you have furniture that you want to give to a friend. Write a letter to him/her and say
- What furniture do you have?
- Why would he/she like it?
- How can he/she pick it up?
Dear Sarah,
I am so sorry that I do not writing to you in ages. As you know it, I am going to leave here and back to my country very soon, so I am very busy these days.
Right now, I am packing some of my stuffs; however, I should leave other them. I decided to give you one of my stuff, as probably guessed it is my China table. I know, you always like this table and think it suitable for you dining room. You know this furniture is very valuable to me and when I bought that, I never imagined someday I lost it. However, I be glad to give it to you.
Last day I bought my ticket for 21 April. It means that I should leave town almost 7 days from now. I think It is very good if you can here and pickup this table before I leave the town. Whatever, if you cannot make it, I leave this table to my property owner and I will tell her about you.
Please do not be hesitate and call me and inform me which approach is much suitable for you. In addition, inform me the day you will come here.
I will be miss you.
Mari.
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I be glad to give it to you.
I will be glad to give it to you.
Sentence: Please do not be hesitate and call me and inform me which approach is much suitable for you.
Description: An interjection is not usually followed by a verb 'to do', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to Please and do
Sentence: I will be miss you.
Sentence: I will be missing you.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 10
No. of Words: 211 200
No. of Characters: 774 1000
No. of Different Words: 108 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.811 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.668 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.864 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 34 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 19 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 11 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 1 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.188 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.635 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.426 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.679 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.337 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 4