You are working for a company.You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
write a letter to your manager.In your letter
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Sir,
I am writing to this letter with regards to inform you that I need to take seven days off, starting from 20th of next month.
I need to take one week leaves due to participate for my sisters degree convocation which is going to be held on 25th of February In UK.All my family is about to participate for that and we are planning to leave the country 19th Friday.Since this is the first time we are flying to UK, we hope to stay few more days to see all around.So please be kind enough to grant permission for these leaves as this is really necessary to me.
I have already discussed about the leaves and the way I'm going to manage my works with the Team lead.I am planning to put an extra effort by staying long hours after the normal office hours.As I'm two weeks ahead of my leaves, I think I can manage all my work before I leave.By any chance if I'm unable to finish my work, my colleague Maheshika will take care of it as per the plan.Hopefully, I can complete my work as planned.
I would be very much obliged to you if you could give permission for my applied leaves. I assure you no uncompleted work will be reported during my absence.I am looking forward to hear from you. Thank You.
Yours Sincerely,
Upulee
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due to participate for my sisters degree convocation
due to participating for my sister's degree convocation
to leave the country 19th Friday
to leave the country on 19th Friday
I am looking forward to hear from you
I am looking forward to hearing from you
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
More sentences varieties wanted. Look, a lot of sentences start with subject 'I'.
No. of Words: 244 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 244 200
No. of Characters: 971 1000
No. of Different Words: 142 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.952 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.98 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.209 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 57 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 30 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 18 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 33.923 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.389 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.884 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.294 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4