You borrow a book from the library, the book now damage. Write:
1. Give the detail about the book.
2. How to damage the book.
3. What do you want to do about it
To librarian,
I am writing to apology for the damage I caused to a book that I borrowed from City Library last Monday. I am very sorry for not taking care of the book and I would like to pay the full fee to replace the book.
The book I borrowed last week is Engineering Handbook by John Smith published in 2010. I need this book because it contains all the necessary information I need for my research assignment.
I have never thought I would cause any damages to this book as I always believe that it is my responsibility to protect the materials. However, when I was doing my assignment wit...
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Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 219 200
No. of Characters: 905 1000
No. of Different Words: 124 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.847 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.132 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.526 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.597 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.484 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.763 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.196 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4