Dear Mr.Soyza,
I am writing this to inform you that I will not be able to continue the "Computer Security" course which I am following as part time, due to some circumstances at the work place.
There are some concerns regarding the employees' working hours at the office, and as a result my request for leaving office early to attend to lectures was rejected. Therefore it is not possible for me to attend to classes which are held on weekdays.
As you advised last time I would like to follow the Information Security course as an alternative, which is held only during weekends. I am grateful if you can send me the details about the course and the schedule. And also I would like to know, if it possible to get exemptions on the modules which I have already completed under computer security course, if the same modules are present here.
Thank you,
J.Perera
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And also I would like to know, if it possible to get exemptions
And also I would like to know, whether it is possible to get exemptions
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