Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to apologize from all of you, for the noise that troubled you during the last weekend. I have no hard feelings towards the letter you sent me and I completely understand that sound is very disturbing.
The reason for the noise is we are involved in some house renovations, since my wife and I are going to be parents soon. Currently we have only one bedroom at our house so we started making a nursery. As only 5 months being left for the baby's arrival we wanted to complete it quickly, so the workers continued construction during the weekend also. Of course...
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The reason for the noise is we are involved in some house renovations
The reason for the noise is that we are involved in some house renovations
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