Life changes with different responsibilities and expectations over age. At younger age parents take care and help out kids in everything. But when the age goes so does the responsibilities.
Teenage years bring happiness and joy to life because they have more free time compared to adulthood, and a lot of friends to hangout with. They get to go to school together and spend time everyday. At younger age this might feel as a burden but would be missed afterwards, Teenagers get long school holidays to go on vacations and enjoy time freely. And they get the chance to participate to extra curricul...
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my opinion is teenagers gets to live happier than they do as adults.
my opinion is that teenagers get to live happier than they do as adults.
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But on the other hand when they get the chance they don not have to worry about expenses like they did as teenagers. But with all the recurring problems ...
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