You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card.However, the card was missing from the envelope.Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter :» explain why you are writing» express concern about

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You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card.
However, the card was missing from the envelope.

Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter :

» explain why you are writing
» express concern about the missing card
» ask them what they intend to do

Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my concern over a letter about the new bank card that I received recently from your bank. It was the letter to acknowledge the new card. Unfortunately, the card was missing from the post.

Firstly, I tried contacting the executive in charge through the customer care number mentioned in the letter. To my shock, I was being put on hold for a really long time and my queries were not even answered to my satisfaction. I am really worried about this issue as I had many plans with this card. I had to buy certain things from online using the card number. Now I ...

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