You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
-explain why you have moved.
-describe the new house.
-invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear Abby,
How are you my friend? I hope everyone is well. I apologize for my late response from your last letter as I was pretty busy lately. I mentioned to you before that I accepted the job offer outside the city area and I am about to start on Monday, Sept 21st. For the last 2 months, I need to search for a new place near my work area and fortunately I found the perfect one!
The house was built 5 years ago, previously owned by a couple. It has 2 bedrooms and 2 baths in a 1500 square feet land. The design was contemporary and very clean. What I love most is the upgraded kitchen fit fo...
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You task I is much better than task II, why?
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