You recently read an article, which was very useful for your work. you would like to recommend it to a friend.Write a letter to him/her and say
-what was the article about?
-where did you read it?
-why is it useful for your job?
Dear Bheng,
Hi! I recently come across a magazine article about " Leadership Enhancement ". It tackles a lot of points on improving leadership skills, like building on relationship among peers. How to positively handle your staff in a way that they will understand and be more appreciative despite our position in the middle management. Most interesting in the article really was the topic on dealing with difficult bosses.
I have read this said article in one of our local magazines here in the province. Due to this write up. I am enhanced to read more related articles for additional information on leadership.
With you in mind, urges me to write to you. If you may accept my favor to be one of our guest speaker in one of my plan to conduct training for our incoming staff. Having a friend, with abilities and know how on leadership management, I am confident that your sharing to us you ideas on topics very relevant to our line of work would be beneficial to our staff here in our workplace. Also, this could be very useful for me aspiring for a higher position in the near future.
Thank you. hoping you consider my favor. Will be waiting for your reply soon.
Sincerely,
Mary Rose
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