You stayed in hospital due to illness and received professional care and treatment. After returning home, write a letter to express your appreciation of the professional service of the doctor and nurse.

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You stayed in hospital due to illness and received professional care and treatment. After returning home, write a letter to express your appreciation of the professional service of the doctor and nurse.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to Thank your qualified doctors and nurses who took care when I was hospitalized for two weeks at your hospital.

I got admitted at your hospital to get my left leg alignment surgery. Doctors did preliminary tests and briefed me about the procedure of the surgery and time frame it takes to complete the surgery. With that awareness session, I felt bit relaxed and clarified my basic queries about surgery. After that, I went through the surgery successfully within the mentioned time frame with no other complications during the surgery. On 2nd day aft...

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