the advantages of living in a big family.
I was born in a three-generation family and I realize fantastically pros in having a well-off house. First of all, children are not alone, they always have their siblings to play with. Nevertheless, they will sometimes quarrel but then they can learn how to unite and work together. Second, in the expanded family, each child has to do housework because parents cannot do it alone. Housework is shared and assigned based on each person’s strength. For example, Mom cooks food and cleans up dirt while children wash clothes, wash dishes and sweep the floor. Alternatively, this work not only trains children to be independent, but also makes the family more cohesive.Third, the personality of each family member is various. For instance, some children are quiet, some loud, some are shy, some bold. In addition, some children may love reading or playing, some may love sports or arts. In particular, these things make up a perfect family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 667, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Third
...but also makes the family more cohesive.Third, the personality of each family member ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, nevertheless, second, so, then, third, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in particular, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03846153846 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85313304611 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698717948718 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8097205818 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9 5.23603664747 285% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0560286036836 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0203669695723 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419192301698 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560286036836 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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