Advantages of raising pets for children
Some people believe that raising pets, especially dogs and cats, is not good for the health of children because it can cause some diseases such as asthma or allergy. Whereas, many assert that there are many benefits from growing kitty animals at home. In my view, having indoor pets is extremely useful for young kids for the following reasons.
The most important benefit is that nurturing tiny animals in the house will help children develop a sense of responsibility. Pets always need day- to- day care from their owners if not they can be ill or dead. Therefore, when raising pets, children will learn how to take care of them carefully and have a deep affection for other creatures which forms their exemplary character.
Along with setting up a sense of responsibility for children, growing little animals in the house helps children feel more relax. After hard learning time, playing with pets can release tension of kiddies because lovely animals always bring people brittle laughs and friendliness. Sometimes, pets are considered children’s close friends because they always listen to what children say without complaint.
Finally, growing up with pets will encourage young people become more confident. Children know how to take care of pets from their parents’ step- by- step instruction; hence, they are totally proud of their accomplishments. This positive attitude helps children achieve success in not only studying but also their lives.
To sum up, raising pets promotes children have a sense of responsibility, a balance of living and self- confidence. However, parents should consider which pets are suitable for their children to keep at home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, such as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25746268657 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69543261532 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 106.607317073 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619402985075 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8165308211 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374169227221 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13186912872 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075810871411 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232848356346 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069668399941 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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