Agricultural Production and Consumption in Canada.
The below pie chart summarizes the consumption of agriculture products and its production among the consumers in canada in 2014.
Overall The consumption of grain and oil seed is maximum at 34
% and whereas the production of just oil seeds is found to be at 8%.
The larger proporation of population in canada consumes grain and seeds at 34%. The rate of production of animal products is at peak of 53% and consumers just account for these products at 34%. The production and consumption of fruits and vegetables in canada is at almost same rate, showing former at 20% and latter at 18%.
The percentage of people consuming the red meat is moderate at 20% and the least percentage consumers are 20%,consuming diary as well as coffee, tea at 7% and production of coffee tea is slightly higher by 3%. The production of cereal is moderate at 11%. The least production is for oil and seeds at 8%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72151898734 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80637077764 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487341772152 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.51638089 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.25 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321327724762 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178794839183 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139066825138 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214571126801 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165120518972 0.0819641961636 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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