Nowadays consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s lives do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages
In this modern times consumer items have gained significant importance in our lives. I will shed some merits and demerits of this phenomenon and then give my opinion.
On the one hand there are myriad benefits of people using consumer items. The main advantage is that these items save a person’s time. For instance, using computer to buy online things like household items like clothes, shoes etc. can save the person’s time. In addition computer gadgets have made communication easier and affordable between people. For example, a person can use a mobile phone for chatting and talking to another person wherever they are. They can keep in touch with their relatives and friends. Therefore consumers can get the benefits of these products.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of people relying on consumer goods. First of all, people use gadgets like tabs, laptop, mobile phones, smart watches etc. These items can so many problems in humans.
For example, a person turns very lazy to do manual work and using cars instead of walking which can create health problems.
Although it is understandable that these are essential commodities. In modern life it must not be forgotten that our lives are much more than consumer products
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11650485437 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60232209943 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635922330097 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4022180821 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.875 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.875 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164564589927 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544754064839 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540527607389 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866652178521 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393146854201 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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