Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?
In the modern world, among numerous issues people have to deal with, the Internet is one of them. There is a wide belief that despite the development of the Internet, newspapers will comprise the most essential news for most people. From my personal perspective, I am in favor of this idea owing to the following grounds.
The compelling justification for defending the aforesaid position is that some people had difficulty in accessing the Internet to read the news. It means, the elderly usually showed their preferences or having newspapers rather than surfing the Internet because of the lack of ability of technology. Additionally, in some regions, the Internet is still not covered. A good illustration can be found in the face that reading news from the Internet is not common in all remote areas or islands because of physical facilities so reading newspapers is more popular for the majority of people.
The other reason as to why this standpoint should be supported is newspaper information security. In detail, some websites on the Internet can not be controlled. Therefore, this makes people read fake news and brings some detrimental consequences. Take for example, in the period of COVID - 19 epidemic, if some people are not alert, they will be affected by fake news related to lockdown orders, isolation orders, or conditions of patients so it is better for them to read news from the traditional media to have the most accurate and timely information.
In conclusion, the ongoing arguments have convinced me that although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 277.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06498194946 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83281774456 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545126353791 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 283.868780488 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.732428128 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.916666667 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474976628539 0.215688989381 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165319487898 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169848558896 0.0843802449381 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340151456733 0.15604864568 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180614194235 0.0819641961636 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.