The mentioned table portrays the amount of explorer to Ashdown Museum during the year before as well as the year after it was renovated. The chart exhibits the outcome of estimation after interrogating the visitors about their contentment on the scale of their comfort with their visit during both periods.
From the table it is seen that after reconstruction of the museum, number of sightseer have increased from 74000 to 92000. The pie chart gives a clear idea about the rate of progress obtained from the traveler's point of view. The average amount of extreme satisfaction rate before was 30 and now it have increased to 40 . About 35 percent people were very satisfied after the development of the museum which was earlier 15.
However, there are still people who were dissatisfied. 40 percent people were dissatisfied before which decreased to 15 percent now . Although the rate of percentage of very dissatisfied is noticed after refurbishment but it have eventually decreased to 5 percent from 10 percent. 5 percent visitors did not responded during and after the year of reincarnation.
To epitomize, the reconstruction of the museum escalated the sum of explorers in the Ashdown Museum significantly. Especially, on the criteria of satisfaction after the reconstruction the rate of very satisfied and satisfied increased tremendously by 20 and 10 percent respectively . Furthermore, the decrement of rate of very dissatisfied and dissatisfied are by 5 and 25 percent respectively which is praiseworthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, still, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30290456432 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23361434893 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473029045643 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5532783079 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3076923077 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170895851273 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760576191667 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146599103281 0.0843802449381 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11630570768 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791288718171 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.