The information about the population of towns and cities in several regions around the world with the prediction of future is depicted by the rendered bar graph.The data has been calibrated in percentage.
To begin with ,in 1950, North America tops the list in the porportion of population , it accounted for over the half. Nevertheless, rest of the world comprised to 29% population of urban areas. The population for another two parts was approximately fifth for both namely, Africa and Asia . The Latin America has 42% population 1950. However, in 2007 the population of Latin Americans increased by 34%, likewise a drastic incline was manifested in the population of Africans and Asians, it stood at 40% for each.The population of North America was 79% in 2007 . and the entire world reached to almost a half.
Moving towards in 2030, it is predicted that the population of Latin America would be increased by 8% and the porportion of 11% for reaming the world. In the conrast, it is considered that both Asia and Africa follow the same trend and stood more than half
To cap it all, it can be vividly seen that the data is showing the increasing trend and the population is predicated to be increased in all the nations throughout the span.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Mandeep _Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, nevertheless, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82242990654 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74320150457 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528037383178 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.0467903316 43.030603864 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132733344934 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632606007136 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409500027963 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078284427031 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514193884023 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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