The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40 years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40 years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar and line charts show the millimiters of rain per month, the bar chart shows the monthly average for last year while the line chart summarizes the monthly average for the past 40 years. The data reveals the bar chart is quite similiar to the line chart with some exceptions.

According to the graph the highest rainfall last year happend during January with 70mm of rain compared to the 80mm of the average of the last 40 years. In contrast in the last 40 years the lowest rainfall happened in september while the last years the months which had the lowest mm of rain were August and October. March, May, June and November had more rainfall last year than the average of the last 40 months.

In conclusion the rainfalls of last year follows quite well the average ones of the last 40 years but with some exceptions. October had less than 10 mm of rain last year which is way lower than the average of almost 30mm of the last 40 years.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...of the average of the last 40 years. In contrast in the last 40 years the lowest rainfal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44827586207 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09794519128 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431034482759 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6150845966 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474584302319 0.215688989381 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237124527521 0.103423049105 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132556553073 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333311003128 0.15604864568 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883839746829 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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