The bar chart below shows the highest qualification attained by sex for the working age population in Wales in 2001 2002 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Submitted by Bek on Fri, 08/25/2017 - 12:14

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of both sexes qualifing a high eduction between 2001 and 2002 in Wales and is measured by percentages.

Overall it is immediately apparent that depending on the type of certain bar there was seen marked difference among men and women.

According to the graph,males obtaining a degree or equivalent stood at almost 15 %, while the opposite sex was slight less than that of men by representing about 12 %. Following that, men witnessed the most popularity in GCE A level, which was the most highest by this year, but women's percentage, again, was under twice as margine as the opposite's. Ultimately, the domination of men on this chart ended up in other qualifications, where, in comparison with the latter, the former was larger by approximately 2 %.

However, the leading of females was in three aspects as well. First of all, who received a higher education qualification was almost one in ten, whereas men represented nearly the same case. After that, women experienced the most significant outcome in GCSE grade, at well above a third and males indicated about a fifth. In terms of having no qualification, there was a similarity, by representing 20 % and 24 % respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the type of certain bar there was seen marked difference among men and women. ...
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Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , males
...men and women. According to the graph,males obtaining a degree or equivalent stood ...
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Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'highest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: highest
...opularity in GCE A level, which was the most highest by this year, but womens percentage, ag...
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Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the highest'.
Suggestion: most the highest
...opularity in GCE A level, which was the most highest by this year, but womens percentage, ag...
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Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., the former was larger by approximately 2 %. However, the leading of females ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, third, well, whereas, while, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10447761194 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08933198267 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681592039801 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2669260691 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101477596367 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444484575078 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677919247384 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813699847445 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844593654297 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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