the bar chart below shows the most important causes of stress for different age groups in Canada.
The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of Canadian people who are suffering stress by the most significant causes and belong in different ages.
Overall, the age range of 75 and over people are focused by different types of causes of stress without working sector, while other reasons are setting down by up and down.
The age of 25 to 54, they do not suffer much in own health problems along with no particular reason, whereas the age group is increasing steadily at the cause of not enough money, while, they growing dramatically. In addition, another age group of 55-64, who are called middle age people stay in 10 to 18 percent in all kinds of reasons stress.
On the other hand, between the age group of 65 to 74 who are facing lot of problems which located in 15 to 30 percent. Moreover, in the reason of working too much does not impact on them. Furthermore, the older age group is rising sharply at no particular reason which is almost 35 percent and others reason suffered probably 2 percent, while 22 percent by own health problems.
- In many countries people are now living longer than ever before Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people To what extent do the advantages of having an ag 67
- Whenever towns are planned it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time To what extent do you agree 56
- Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well What problems will your country face in the next ten years How can these problems be overcome Give reasons for your 73
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make Has this become a positive or negative development 78
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... bar chart illustrates the percentage of Canadian people who are suffering stress...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66844919786 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47199996705 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9076149172 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.714285714 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230238050161 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11096599963 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777765272627 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158403347052 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709066718479 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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